I really love the whole concept for this story! It reads like an ova though. As in it seems a bit rushed and heavily condensed. I think it would be awesome if you stretch it out a bit, flesh it out, and polish it more. It would make a great comic in my opinion. And I really like your drawing style
omg he really just walked away O.O he just killed andalusia, then revived and "killed" messara as well. she have to live locked in the glass forever. gosh seems so cruel and irresponsible. feel so sad now... T_T
Just beautiful (: As some have pointed out already, the font clashes a little bit with the overall visual style. I'd suggest replacing it with a font like this one? [link] Other than that, I loved everything about it.
This is a wonderful direction for the text, thank you! For some reason I didn't imagine a style like this, and it seems so obvious now. If I can find something like this but with lower case that would be golden. Thanks again.
Ooh, what a sad but beautiful story! I've been waiting to see what you were working on since you posted that "test" page a while back ... the style is gorgeous, and I love all the textures and colors you've worked with. A very thought-provoking conundrum indeed. You ended the story quite well ;^;~